Beautiful poems that speak of natural elements | "What goes into a butterfly" by Sunil Rajagopal

Sunil Rajagopal writes “What goes into a butterfly” to commemorate the simplicity of the elements of nature, and to capture man’s involvement in it. He touches upon co-existence and symbiotic living among organisms and holds up a contrast between what’s natural and what is constructed by man.

 

Up and around

The young brown mountain, till we found

A land without trees, and piles of cotton

Close enough to kiss, just too far to touch!

A shadow passed, blotting the blue

Skimming the scree, trailed by a scream!

We stood in thrall, to the queen of the mountain

Who wears light, her crown of gold

And the weight of the sky!

It was but a moment, but who will tell that

To the little army standing tall, on the back of my neck?

                    --- We Went Looking for a Golden Eagle, Sunil Rajagopal.

 

Written in very short snippets, the easy verses essentially testify that expression can be achieved even through simplicity. The poet’s words are brisk, bitesize and he writes with an extraordinary quality of introspection and recognition.

The book divides itself into eight parts, each focusing on a central theme. While the Part 1 (Quiet Roads and Hidden Nooks) talk of the fluidity of time and the inevitability of the cycle of death, the Part 2 (In Every Little Drop), harps on the sheer magical beauty of nature, completely mesmerizing us with the utter expressiveness. Part 3 (On Long Walks) focuses on man’s interaction with the ecosystems thriving in the bounty of nature, and gives subtle hints of the conflict between unhindered natural processes and superimposed industrialization. Part 4 (Birds in the sky) is my personal favorite section of the book. As its name suggests, these poems trace the life and habitation of various birds in this earth. Ranging from the Banasan falcon to the vultures, and even silver owls to seagulls; the poet vividly puts to words the majestic existence of these creatures of the sky. Equipped with wonderful descriptions of their appearance and lifestyle, these poems serve as a direct reflection of the poet’s keen eye to the elements of nature. From Part 5 to Part 7, the poet takes on a very skeptical and worrisome tone, where he underlines the cruel ways of man which have pounced its claws on natural processes. He ponders over the indirect blatancy of the hypocrisy of mankind, conveying the contrast of nature with the urban habitats. In these sections and in the section that follows, a clear shift is seen in the tone of the narrator. He goes on being less and less mesmerized by the enchanting qualities of natural beings, and instead talks of his own conflicts and unfulfilled expectations from various things around. The final section Part 8 (The Window Within) looms large with its theme of self-realization and inward looking, deriving lessons from the personifications of the natural things we see around. It allots more importance to the projected centricity of mankind within the broad prospect of the universe.


“I ran and ran, and then some more

Down dark alleys, chasing tranquil light

Till I could no more.

There in the dark, with nowhere to go

Standing still and breathing slow,

I found it within.”

                                                        ---- Within, Sunil Rajagopal 

 

Moving on to the literary aspects of the poetry, I must say that the poet’s ability to achieve empathy and reinforce tolerance through his verses is indeed very commendable. He writes with the usage of words brimming with sheer beauty, and his impactful diction strengthens the thoughts he wants to convey. The linking between the stray thoughts within a particular poem is often left undone, perhaps to invite reader perceptions. As a consequence, the poems never align themselves rigidly to a particular theme. Rather, they lay themselves out without any bar, and the theme emerges like a flicker of a flame rising from a wildfire. The verses often shoot out uncontrollably, giving the notion that the narrator has been carried away. Although this might be a delightful quality to some, it is to be noted that his kind of vague ambiguity often struggles to let the poem speak for itself. In an attempt to shroud themselves under the cloak of universalism and multi-interpretational takeaways, they often get lost in the mist of nonchalant nothingness. Even with the plethora of reasons to be recommended tainted by some downsides, this pretty collection of poetry deserves a read from any reader out there.


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Disclaimer: This review is in lieu of a review copy. 




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